Interesting Researches about Super Mario.
Jul 23, 2015 13:15
Today, I learned about two interesting researches about Super Mario.
One is related to Super Mario 64, and the other is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
According to the former study done in German, playing Super Mario 64 make people to smarter and to improve their reflexes.
Specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
However, this information came from the internet, and I couldn't find the original source.
So this might fake information, but somehow I feel it as truth.
One is related to Super Mario 64, and the other is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
According to the former study done in German, playing Super Mario 64 make people to smarter and to improve their reflexes.
Specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
However, this information came from the internet, and I couldn't find the original source.
So this might fake information, but somehow I feel it as truth.
No. 1 hodokeru's correction
- Interesting Researches about Super Mario.
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Interesting Articles about Super Mario.
Did you read an article about a research done on Super Mario? "Researches" does not make sense
- Today, I learned about two interesting researches about Super Mario.
- Today, I learned about read two interesting articles about researches done on Super Mario.
- One is related to Super Mario 64, and the other is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
- One is related to Super Mario 64, and the other one is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
- According to the former study done in German, playing Super Mario 64 make people to smarter and to improve their reflexes.
- According to a former study done in Germany, playing Super Mario 64 makes people to smarter and to improves their reflexes.
- Specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
- This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
- It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
- It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer's.
- According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
- According to the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine makes people to more kind.
- However, this information came from the internet, and I couldn't find the original source.
- However, this information came from the internet, and I couldn't find the original source,-
- So this might fake information, but somehow I feel it as truth.
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-so this might be false information, but somehow I feel it is true.
connect this sentence to the previous sentence
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
> Did you read an article about a research done on Super Mario?
Ah, yes I did. Thank you for the guess!
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
> Did you read an article about a research done on Super Mario?
Ah, yes I did. Thank you for the guess!
No. 2 Bull's correction
- It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
- It was suggested that this game might help in treating diseases, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
- According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
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According to the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine makes people kinder
Hmm. I think "kinder" is grammatically correct, but "more kind" may be ok. Even I'm not sure! orz
kanotown
Thank you very much for your corrections!
I will use "kinder" from now on! According to the internet, it seems more common than "more kind". :)
Thank you very much for your corrections!
I will use "kinder" from now on! According to the internet, it seems more common than "more kind". :)
No. 3 prateeti's correction
- Today, I learned about two interesting researches about Super Mario.
- Today, I read two interesting articles that had researched Super Mario.
- One is related to Super Mario 64, and the other is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
- One is related to Super Mario 64 and the other one is related to Super Mario Sunshine.
- According to the former study done in German, playing Super Mario 64 make people to smarter and to improve their reflexes.
- According to a former study done in Germany, playing Super Mario 64 makes people smarter and improves their reflexes.
- Specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
- More specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seem to enlarge.
- It was suggested that this game might help in treatment, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer.
- It was suggested that this game might help in the treatment of mental illnesses, such as schizophrenia and Alzheimer's.
- According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
- According to the second study, playing Super Mario Sunshine makes people more kind.
- However, this information came from the internet, and I couldn't find the original source.
- However, this information came from the internet, and I wasn't able to find the original source.
- So this might fake information, but somehow I feel it as truth.
- So it might be fake information, but I feel like it is the truth.
Wow! That's amazing. It makes me want to play Super Mario.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
> I wasn't able to find the original source.
I searched for the clear difference between "couldn't" and "wasn't able to" on the internet, but I couldn't(or wasn't able to?) figure it out. It would be very helpful if you could describe it.
> It makes me want to play Super Mario.
Haha, me too. :)
- However, this information came from the internet, and I wasn't able to find the original source.
> I wasn't able to find the original source.
I searched for the clear difference between "couldn't" and "wasn't able to" on the internet, but I couldn't(or wasn't able to?) figure it out. It would be very helpful if you could describe it.
> It makes me want to play Super Mario.
Haha, me too. :)
prateeti
Could/Could not and Was able to/ Was not able to can be interchangeable, but the context will often decide which is chosen.
'Could not' と 'Was not Able to' の交換をすることができます。
でも、特定の文脈で単語を選ばなければなりません。
This webpage is helpful- http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/122310/was-able-to-vs-could
この場合は... 'Wasn't able to' sounds more fluent.
Could/Could not and Was able to/ Was not able to can be interchangeable, but the context will often decide which is chosen.
'Could not' と 'Was not Able to' の交換をすることができます。
でも、特定の文脈で単語を選ばなければなりません。
This webpage is helpful- http://english.stackexchange.com/questions/122310/was-able-to-vs-could
この場合は... 'Wasn't able to' sounds more fluent.
kanotown
Thank you very much!
I’ve learned a lot. :D
Thank you very much!
I’ve learned a lot. :D
No. 4 Timmy's correction
- Specifically, brain regions related to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
- Specifically, brain regions related (or: (that are) responsible) to memory formation, spatial orientation, strategic planning and fine motor skills seemed to be enlarged.
- According the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine make people to more kind.
- According to the the latter study, playing Super Mario Sunshine makes people more compassionate.
There is an article about this published in "Nature" (the world's most highly cited interdisciplinary science journal) : http://www.nature.com/mp/journal/v19/n2/full/mp2013120a.html
So no it's not fake at all.
So no it's not fake at all.
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Nature?! Wow, it's amazing! Thank you for letting me know it! :D
Thank you very much always for correcting my post!
Nature?! Wow, it's amazing! Thank you for letting me know it! :D
Timmy
You are welcome!^_^
You are welcome!^_^